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Just a cute book report cover for my book report. I had to blur out my last name. I used the same lineart for the cat that I used for the Dawny referance picture linked her in a thumbnail



This thing a huge file. If you would like I can start making linearts ^^

I'll make a poll.


(c) Book name and cat character Squirrelflight goes to the 4 Erin Hunter's and the HarperCollins Children Publishers

(c) Of the cat art goes to me

(c) Font goes to PSD and so does the background

-Phail- I think most of that (c) wasn't needed. Just to be save.
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First off: You need to change all of the text to a darker color. You can't read the text. Did you even check that? Second: The rainbow is suddenly white in the corner. This all screams "I didn't even look at this, I just ran it through a terrible image processing program". The text isn't even centered.

Okay, now that that's out of the way: Is Starlight a book about a blurry cat standing on a rainbow? The cover says nothing about the book, except that there are cats, which is in the title. Also, more about the rainbows. Why is there a rainbow? The book is called Starlight, not Rainbows. Would it have hurt to put a black background with stars on it?

I haven't even talked about the picture yet. Okay, it's not bad, but it's blurry, like someone sloppily resized it, and has a white outline, like it was drawn on a white background without using layers. If you're gonna draw something, don't draw it on the background, draw it on the layer above it.

Overall, this looks unprofessional and tacky, and...

OH GOD

THE EYES HAVE FACES

THEY ARE WATCHING ME WHY ARE THEY SMILING GET THEM AWAY HELP ME HELP ME HE